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Creative Corner - Breaking Barriers

Imagine the world
If it were like this
 
The world was joyful
The laughter didn’t die
 
The world was happiness
There was never a faint cry
 
The world was truthful
There was never a told lie
 
The world was forever
There was never a goodbye
 
The world was easy
You didn’t even have to try
 
You can imagine all of these things
But it’s the real things that push through and win
 
You can imagine all these happy thoughts
But in the end they get mixed in with unfortunate knots
 
There will always be barriers
Separating you and what you want
 
In all the joy
The laughter always dies
 
With all the happiness
There must be faint cries
 
In all the truth
People tell lies
 
The world doesn’t last forever
There are some sad goodbyes
 
The world is not easy
You do have to try
 
You must try your best
To get through it all
 
Learn from your mistakes
To make sense of the scrawl
 
Keep going
And do no fall
 
Stand up straight
Stand up tall
 
For you have to be strong
To push through the wall

by Mary
Ontario, Canada

 
Posted by Global Administrator on 4/28/2010 11:43:13 AM


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jackie369
love it! good job
4/28/2010 11:44:08 PM

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kaleann92
i agree with that! love it!
Lindsey ;)
4/29/2010 3:48:52 PM

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budster11
That poem was excellent!
4/30/2010 6:13:09 PM

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MaryD
Thanks guys! I'm glad you like it :)
5/1/2010 4:45:26 PM

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MaryD
Thanks guys! I'm glad you like it :)
5/1/2010 4:45:30 PM

painted_toenails
Great Job! Love it :)
5/3/2010 5:21:50 PM

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ErinW
amazing
5/4/2010 1:52:34 PM

sarahbear365
Great job! I love it!!! :)
5/7/2010 9:14:05 PM

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HoopsGirl
pretty neat...I like it! =D
5/8/2010 11:10:34 AM

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childofweakness
I LOVE THIS! It's so inspiring Mary, God bless you! :)
5/9/2010 7:44:38 PM

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MaryD
Thank you so much guys! :)
Just wondering, did you guys get how the wall at the end is meant to symbolize the barriers that I mention near the middle? Because people that I showed it to (Not on here) didn't get that until I told them.
5/10/2010 5:02:07 PM

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ChristianSister
This is so Kool! I luv it!
5/10/2010 7:27:15 PM

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4everGodsgirls
wow, outstanding!!!
i did understand the part about the wall at the end. good job ;)
5/10/2010 11:02:35 PM

sparrow
i like it!:) ur poetry is great!:)
5/11/2010 11:42:24 PM

sparrow
(oh and how do i post a new poem or creative thought on here? anyone know? i have something i would love to post. :) )
5/11/2010 11:43:13 PM

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doodlebug
I love this!
5/14/2010 6:06:17 PM

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MaryD
Thanks! :D

@Sparrow you can email it to susie@susiemag.com and label it CREATIVE CORNER. Then I think they publish some but not all of them (Or at least I am pretty sure, I don't really know). But that is how u do it :D
5/14/2010 10:51:54 PM

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promessa
good job! :)
6/3/2010 6:57:03 PM

jumperprincess97
This great! (: You have a real talent
2/13/2012 4:13:31 PM

jumperprincess97
This great! (: You have a real talent
2/13/2012 4:13:40 PM

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