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Poem

by Elizabeth Beard, 17, Wharton, TX

As I was rising up to Heaven,
The day the Lord came back,
I could see His glory shining
With His angels all around.
Surrounded by my loved ones,
Family and friends and all,
I felt a tear roll down my check
As I heard the names He called.
He said, "Well done my faithful servant,
You have won eternal life with Me."
And I said, "What about them?
The ones that I love?
They tried hard to live life right.
Please let them into Heaven,
Just do it Lord for me.
They thought they were doing right.
Please let them in for me."
Jesus saw the tears in my eyes
And He wiped them all away.
He said now My precious child,
I have felt the same way everyday.
Now you are where you belong.
Heaven is now your home.
Child, take a look around
At all the lives that you have changed."
"Yes Lord," I replied, "I know."
"You have done a great thing through me,
You have changed everything.
But please, please let them in for me."
As I looked at my Saviors face,
I swear I saw tears in His eyes.
As He held me close to His chest
And He kindly let me cry.
Now I know He understands
What I'm feeling now.
 
Posted by Global Administrator on 8/26/2010 10:32:52 AM


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Caroline
That was SO good! You really captured the feeling of the whole thing very well. It was a sweet reminder to me of the way Jesus will wipe our tears away in Heaven. Keep up the good work!
8/26/2010 10:48:04 PM

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kaleann92
WOW! That's AMAZING!!!! That speaks to me SO much right now because of what I am going through right now. THANK YOU!!!!
Lindsey ;)
8/27/2010 12:04:47 PM

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childofweakness
Oh my goodness, I absolutely love this!! It's beautiful! Thanks for submitting this Elizabeth, God bless you. :)
8/28/2010 9:03:53 AM

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Katie
That was really beautiful. I was surprised when it brought tears to my eyes...it was beautiful.
8/29/2010 7:25:02 PM

Carolot96
Wow. That is so so powerful (and sad)! Thank you!
9/1/2010 9:43:00 AM

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SDS.chic
I love this it's so fantastic!
9/6/2010 10:43:19 AM

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elljay77
that was amaaazing! very sweet and very touching :)
thanks for that
9/18/2010 2:01:44 AM

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christiansrule
really good poems i write poems too!
9/19/2010 1:07:06 PM

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SinginForHim133
BRAVO!! That could be in a book!!! Write more!
10/21/2010 10:37:02 AM

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ilovehorses
AWWW! you guys make me want to write more! I haven't in forever but only because I never thought anyone liked them... THANKS!
1/26/2012 3:56:43 PM

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