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Hey SUSIE girls! We want to show off your creative side. • Got a poem you’ve written? Let us see it! • What about your art? Send us a scanned image of your work! • Are you a photographer? E-mail a couple of your pics to us! Then a couple of times each month we’ll feature the creative work of SUSIE girls here in the Creative Corner. Check out what this week’s edition of what SUSIE girls are doing!

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In My Hand

by Lauren, 16, St. Louis, Mo.

I hold you in the palm of my hand so that when the wind and the storm make you fall, I am a sturdy foundation to stand on.

I hold you in the palm of my hand for when you cry, let the tears fall at your feet for my hand to catch.

I hold you in the palm of my hand so that when you feel alone and abandoned you know I stand beside you.

When you feel alone, realize you never will be.

From where I stand, I can see the weight of the world strapped across your back dragging you down. My hand supports the weight as it lays by your feet so you can stand up straight.

I hold you in the palm of my hand because my hand never tires for it is strengthened by my love. And my love shall never end.

Though my fingers do not form a protective cage around you, my fingers will never allow the unbearable to trespass.

And as I look down on you, I smile. For when you tilt your head up toward the sky, I know you see my reflection beyond the dark, star-less night. And I see you smile because you know you are safe and you always will be for your faith, too, lies in the palm of my hand.

 
Posted by Global Administrator on 7/6/2010 3:21:07 PM


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Carolot96
Wow! That's really good, sweet, and so true! Thanks Lauren!
7/7/2010 8:07:49 AM

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childofweakness
This is so sweet and true and I love it! Thanks for submitting, Lauren=)
7/7/2010 9:00:55 AM

Dolly102
this is really good:) Thank you so much for the encouragement!! I really needed it:)
7/13/2010 5:47:47 PM

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YouRmySonshine
this is beautiful! :)
7/19/2010 5:04:48 PM

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Caroline
That was so beautiful and encouraging!
7/19/2010 5:19:18 PM

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armsopenwide
I LOVE this! Thanks Lauren. (:
7/19/2010 6:57:32 PM

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SusiefoundSusie
This poem is so beautiful! The reassurance of its words reminds me of that which I get from Psalm 139.

Keep on writing Lauren, because God has truly given you a talent for speaking to people through your words!
7/20/2010 11:12:07 PM

egeff
That is such a beautiful poem! God has blessed you with amazing ability. I've been struggling a lot with feeling lonely and when i read that I almost cried because it is so true! I think sometimes the world distracts us so much and we get so preoccupied trying to impress others and getting them to love us that we forget that we are loved by God.
7/21/2010 10:02:59 AM

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forHimforever
This is wonderful Lauren! :D Thank you for writing what God has put on your heart :D
7/26/2010 9:11:59 PM

Rocky
That was sooo good. For a moment, well a couple of moments, I thought a professional was writing this. It's sooo inspirational. I love it!!! :)My eyes got watery.
8/3/2010 1:12:08 PM

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