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Demons

Demons
by Lauren, 16, St. Louis, Mo.

Fighting demons one-by-one,
But really the battle’s just begun.
 
Look in the mirror, and what do I see?
Everything I wish I could change about me.
 
Flip through the channels on the TV,
And see everything I feel I should be.
 
Turning pages in magazines filled with flawless faces,
And knowing I can’t put my feet in their places.
 
I’ll fix everything I can about me,
But who is it I’ll turn out to be?
 
Rules upon rules with no exceptions,
Then I’m only asking for their rejection.
 
I’ll start by changing just one thing,
After that, the changing will be never-ending.
 
Never enough-more and more;
But who is it I’m changing for?
 
Don’t do it for those who say you need it most,
Because, then, you’ll become one of their earthly hosts.
 
Do it for you if it’s in God’s plan,
Because His is the only plan that has love to make it stand.
 
So you’re fighting demons one-by-one.
 
Step aside!
 
Because my God’s already won.
 
Posted by Global Administrator on 6/24/2010 10:39:54 AM


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jaydelr
Woah, that is such a good poem. So powerful! =)
6/24/2010 6:02:17 PM

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childofweakness
Oh my goodness, I love this! You're really talented, Lauren = D I agree, it's so powerful and inspiring and true. God bless you!
6/24/2010 8:55:03 PM

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4everGodsgirls
WOW! awesome poem! your wording and message is fantastic ;)
6/24/2010 11:33:11 PM

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armsopenwide
This is amazing! God's blessed you with a gift for writing (: I love the last two lines!!
6/25/2010 8:17:41 AM

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sugar
:) excellent
6/25/2010 12:42:09 PM

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hannahbear247
Wow!You are TALENTED!!
6/27/2010 3:05:30 PM

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SierraMist1295
Great job Lauren!! LoVe It!!!! Keep shining for Jesus! <3
6/27/2010 10:59:07 PM

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kiwi2460
Loved it !!!
6/29/2010 11:56:45 AM

Carolot96
Wow that is AMAZING! And it's such a powerful, true, poem!
6/29/2010 1:39:19 PM

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Jodi_Lauren
Wow this was beautiful and inspiring. You're very talented. =]
6/30/2010 6:46:26 PM

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arijoy
I love this!! Good job :)
7/2/2010 8:58:19 PM

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Loneyes
Awesome. :)
7/3/2010 12:01:14 AM

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MozartGURL
great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
7/4/2010 6:16:23 PM

rose1214
this is really good!
7/5/2010 10:14:30 AM

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luv2laugh
that was soo good! i luv it!
7/5/2010 9:09:10 PM

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silentdancer94
Whoa girl, very impactful and inspiring! Love love love it! :)
7/15/2010 10:48:28 AM

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