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Gone

Gone
by Laurel, 15, Bremen, Ohio

A senior in high school
straight A's too
Never once got the chance to say "I do”
Her life, taken by one careless mistake,
the person in the other car decided to make
he had a few drinks and thought he was fine..
But he must have really been out of his mind...
as my teardrops flow onto your icy grave
I know at once you'd want me to be brave
--drinking and driving just don’t mix--
so please don’t put them together like this
cause it might be your teardrops on your best friend's grave
and honestly I wish I could be brave
but bravery like yours is so hard to find..
when the only time you'll see your best friend again, is in your mind
 
Posted by Global Administrator on 6/24/2010 10:36:12 AM


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musicluver
aww thats so sad =(
but its a beautiful peom!
6/25/2010 10:28:18 AM

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igniteurlife
this is heartbreaking but it makes us all think for sure:[
6/28/2010 2:06:33 AM

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Coconut
So beautiful. And it really makes you think about your choices can impact others.
6/28/2010 2:56:47 PM

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mfox
wow that is so sad, but so beautifully written!! It makes me think.. thanks for this poem you wrote
7/1/2010 12:22:44 PM

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childofweakness
This is suuch a well-written poem! But oh it's so sad =( Thanks for submitting this, Laurel.
7/1/2010 1:42:08 PM

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akm1288
That is a beautiful (and sad) poem! Is it from experience???
7/1/2010 9:45:25 PM

Carolot96
That's an amazing and sad poem at the same time!
7/2/2010 8:08:27 AM

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96lela
this is such a beautiful poem !
7/2/2010 8:57:23 AM

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bubblesgirl13520
I've seen chain mails like this! it is so sad!
7/3/2010 3:30:26 PM

taylorrtot
my sister was hit by a driver her senior year, but she survived. He was drunk or on drugs or both I never got the full story but she did hurt her knee and she couldn't play softball much that year.
7/5/2010 6:06:24 PM

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luv2laugh
ur really good! that was soo sad! :(
7/5/2010 9:10:45 PM

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luv2laugh
ur really good! that was soo sad! :(
7/5/2010 9:10:50 PM

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luv2laugh
that's really good! but so sad, too. :'(
7/5/2010 9:11:20 PM

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luv2laugh
that's really good! but so sad, too. :'(
7/5/2010 9:11:23 PM

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luv2laugh
sorry, my thing kept repeating
7/5/2010 9:12:07 PM

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silentdancer94
Girl, that made me cry! I'm very sorry about your friend ='(
7/15/2010 10:46:53 AM

Izzy
I almost cried! Really beautiful!
8/20/2010 9:50:40 AM

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