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Goodbye

Goodbye
by Laurel, 15, Bremen, Ohio

A heart of gold stopped beating,
hard working hands now rest.
God broke our hearts to prove to us he only takes the best.
We think of you in silence,
we often speak your name,
 all we have are memories,
your picture in a frame.
A million times we've thought of you,
a million times we've cried.
If love alone could have saved you,
 you never would have died.
It broke our hearts to lose you,
 but you didn’t go alone.
For a part of us went with you the day God took you home.
 
Posted by Global Administrator on 6/24/2010 10:38:52 AM


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childofweakness
Aw! =( This is so beautiful, but so sad..
6/24/2010 8:56:27 PM

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superpopper
THAT is beautiful.
6/25/2010 8:52:54 PM

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SierraMist1295
Aww........so sad but oh so good!
6/27/2010 11:01:48 PM

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Coconut
This is so beautiful. A very close friend of mine recently died, so I know exactly how you feel. The good news is that we will see them in heaven. I know that that is not much consolation now, but I hope God gives you a "peace that transcends all understanding." Thank you for writing such a beautiful expression of love for the one you lost.
6/28/2010 2:54:30 PM

Carolot96
Wow that's GREAT! LOVE it!
6/29/2010 1:40:30 PM

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akm1288
So touching. Beautiful. Sad. :( It reminds me that even though your life may be going well, it doesn't mean that it will continue. God may want you to come to His
7/1/2010 11:04:13 PM

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akm1288
So touching. Beautiful. Sad. :( It reminds me that even though your life may be going well, it doesn't mean that it will continue. God may want you to come to His
7/1/2010 11:04:14 PM

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bubblesgirl13520
Why are all the good poem's so sad?
7/3/2010 3:32:49 PM

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gigglemonster17
I wrote this about a 9 year old boy Riley who passed away. He was an amazing boy who touched alot of lives and will be missed greatly.
7/3/2010 5:39:33 PM

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SophieWren
wow! Thats such a great but emotional poem.
7/4/2010 5:18:09 PM

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luv2laugh
that's so sad :'(
7/5/2010 9:13:42 PM

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morganalexa95
this is amazing. i just lost my very good friend and this helps me so much!
7/13/2010 2:03:37 AM

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silentdancer94
Isn't poetry such a wonderful way to express our feelings? Well done:)
7/15/2010 10:43:33 AM

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