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Creative Corner 3-2-2010

Broken to be Whole
by Lissa, 18, Lake Hiawatha, NJ

round and round and round and round
battle is silent, she cries but makes no sound
and the cycle repeats, she begs to be free
but she fears that maybe her life is the key
she wants to escape, but she wants to fight
to be free from where nothing is wrong, but nothing seems right
and she wants to give up more than her spirit and soul
she wants to be broken, so she can be whole



Inspired 
by Lissa, 18, Hiawatha, NJ
 
It is not I who writes my poetry
The rhymes, and lines, and prose
just like I didn't craft the bumblebee
to tiptoe on a petal of a rose

But the one who made the universe
scattered  stars in the night
gave me the words to write each verse
He inspired me to write.



Confliction

by Jennie, 15, Sandia Park, N.M.

She stands alone in the light of a window
Emotions dancing across her face
The shadows creep up behind her slow
And lure, screeching "come and play"
She takes a wavering step forward
and cautiously peers in
That is when the battle
Inside her truly begins
Her demons scream at her loudly
With a million honey sweet lies
While the light from the window shines proudly
Whispering "here the real truth lies"
In the glass she sees her reflection
Her own sad eyes seem to spite her
As she struggles with the confliction
Of the devil and angel inside her
 
Posted by Global Administrator on 3/2/2010 4:54:18 PM


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Burrito
Lissa, I love Broken To Be Whole! you are very talented. :)
3/2/2010 6:31:24 PM

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HoneyLissaBee
Thanks :-) It's an old poem though... I think I wrote it when I was 15.
3/4/2010 5:50:33 AM

Burrito
That dosnt matter. i still love it! haha :)
3/5/2010 6:45:03 PM

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kimmi101
lissa that wa s really good you have a good talent
3/8/2010 7:41:48 PM

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HoneyLissaBee
Thanks, Kimmi. I appreciate that!
3/12/2010 12:34:17 AM

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