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Creative Corner - Life as a Teenager

Life as a Teenager
by Hannah, 15, San Jose, Costa Rica
Life as a teenager isn’t ever a treat
We try to fit in, but we always feel beat
Everything we do doesn’t ever feel right
We’re so insecure, we cry through the night
We know from our parents, we will always regret
Our mistakes from the past, we will never forget
We have to be perfect yet perfect is “strange”
We want something new yet no one wants change
We want to be loved, but not to be hurt
And once we are “loved” we’re treated like dirt
We’re testing our wings in this great big place
Wanting to win first in this great big race
The Outward facade is all that matters
All our dreams are broken and in shatters
Low self-esteem pulls us down like a weight
We’re just a face in the crowd, the whole world we hate
Is there a point to this life we are living?
Will anyone learn from the example we are giving?
Is it true we are abandoned; is there One who will care?
Is there a God who can hear from up there?
Just maybe there could be a small stream of light
To bring us some hope in this never-ending fight
What if there is a God who truly loves us all
Even us teenagers with faith ever so small
 
Posted by Global Administrator on 5/25/2010 2:26:19 PM


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Sarah_GodsGirl
Nice poem. Great job! I can relate sometimes. =]
5/25/2010 3:17:52 PM

octobersky19
this is really good!!!!
5/25/2010 5:20:55 PM

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savedbychrist
what a good poem! so true, so true.
5/25/2010 6:57:20 PM

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Godsgirl2
That was a good poem! I like it a lot, it describes every teenager!
-aMbEr <3
5/25/2010 7:05:04 PM

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Giggle
That is so true. Very well put together. Congratulations on your acheivement, but don't feel so down about life, God doesn't want you to feel grief.
5/25/2010 7:37:22 PM

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wvccgirl
wow that is really good
5/28/2010 8:07:03 PM

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doodlebug
Wow! This is soooooo good!! :)
5/29/2010 6:24:07 PM

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jesusfreak93
wow this is rly good!
6/3/2010 3:02:50 PM

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babybus
This is an amazing poem! I loved your wording.
6/3/2010 6:48:59 PM

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babybus
This is an amazing poem! I loved your wording.
6/3/2010 6:49:02 PM

rose1214
wow! that is amazing! it seems to totally describe me and my life. thank you for this amazing poem
6/4/2010 8:42:44 AM

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Coconut
That is wonderful!!!!! I love it!!!!
6/4/2010 5:16:48 PM

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rgraham
I love this poem!
6/5/2010 12:05:35 PM

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GoodGurl19
This is truly amazing! It captures the feelings of most teenagers...even adults. (: Awesome
6/5/2010 9:37:52 PM

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alaskagirl97
Great poem!!!
6/7/2010 3:27:58 PM

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alaskagirl97
Great poem!!!
6/7/2010 3:28:00 PM

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outerbanksgirl26
love this poem! thanks!:)
6/8/2010 2:16:22 PM

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JannaSue
me and my friend miceala LOVE this!!!!
6/8/2010 4:41:33 PM

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JannaSue
me and my friend miceala LOVE this!!!!
6/8/2010 4:41:38 PM

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missunshine93
awesome poem I can relate.
6/9/2010 2:21:18 PM

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Brooke
You have an amazing gift, and I'm so glad you're using it to bring honor to God and to relate to other teen girls! Thanks for posting this!
6/11/2010 11:18:00 AM

caar-mo
i love this. i feel like it is so true. i would love for it to change though...
6/13/2010 9:09:34 PM

violinluv
=]
6/17/2010 5:59:57 AM

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vlaari
wow. that's a good poem.
6/18/2010 2:48:36 PM

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SugaBugaa15
Girl, that is deeeep. Totally relatable, too.
6/18/2010 3:03:53 PM

sarahloveschrist
This is probably the best poem I have ever read b/c of the honesty and how blunt it is. You are amazing, keep writing!
6/21/2010 8:14:31 PM

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romans12_2
Wow! You could have a future in poetry! The poem is so true. I know I feel that way!
6/22/2010 4:51:16 PM

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Ms.bookworm1314
awesome poem! its very true, for us teens =]
6/22/2010 5:24:49 PM

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BeautifulLove
I love this poem, and I can relate. :) You are very, very talented! And that's not something I say to just everyone who can write a poem. ;)
6/23/2010 3:36:42 AM

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4everGodsgirls
awesome poem! keep writing =]
6/23/2010 2:34:56 PM

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annette5
this is really good you definitely have talent!!! and its so true!!!
6/23/2010 4:29:15 PM

Izzy
Yup, so true!
8/20/2010 10:06:05 AM

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