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She Had it Before

It sits on a wall,
To patiently wait
To cast out its stare—
The succulent bait.
It is not genteel
And it is not kind
It is a hunter
With one thing in mind

Just look at this girl
Who swallowed the bait
And wanted to leave
When it was too late.

She saw the object,
And its safe display.
She sat before it
And it lured her away.

The girl sat and listened
For hours to hear
The sweet words it spoke
So close to her ear.

Its words seemed pleasant
But soon were unbidden.
She wished she could leave
But that was forbidden

“You’re simply too fat”
It once said to her.
So she believed it
And searched for the cure.

Soon, she stopped eating.
It was not content.
It found something else
With which to torment.

She never could please
That glimmering glaze.
She wanted again
To hear it’s praise.

But all she would hear
Were tasks to be done
And each time she finished,
There was a new one

She did not like it,
That thing on the wall
And wished she had never
Looked in it at all.

She wanted something
And wanted it so,
But could not have it,
For the thing said “no”.

What she wanted now
Could not be clearer.
She had it before
She looked in the mirror
 
Posted by Global Administrator on 10/17/2011 1:54:15 PM


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sweetie
It's beautiful!
10/17/2011 5:53:18 PM

neveralone
that's awesome!!(:
10/18/2011 5:41:54 PM

neveralone
that's awesome!!(:
10/18/2011 5:42:07 PM

neveralone
that's awesome!!(:
10/18/2011 5:42:12 PM

neveralone
that's awesome!!(:
10/18/2011 5:42:16 PM

neveralone
that's awesome!!(:
10/18/2011 5:42:21 PM

neveralone
that's awesome!!(:
10/18/2011 5:42:26 PM

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doodlebug
so pretty!!!
10/22/2011 8:14:33 PM

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Starlight62
Wow that's awesome!
10/24/2011 1:07:23 PM

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BeautifulLove
Wow, this is amazing! So beautiful. <3
10/27/2011 1:43:44 PM

mlouise
This is an amazing peice of art! It is so powerfully true. Good Work
10/28/2011 1:44:35 PM

mlouise
This is an amazing peice of art! It is so powerfully true. Good Work
10/28/2011 1:44:41 PM

mlouise
This is an amazing peice of art! It is so powerfully true. Good Work
10/28/2011 1:44:45 PM

mlouise
This is an amazing peice of art! It is so powerfully true. Good Work
10/28/2011 1:44:48 PM

mlouise
This is an amazing peice of art! It is so powerfully true. Good Work
10/28/2011 1:44:51 PM

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doodlebug
i love this so much! it's so beautiful :)
10/29/2011 2:50:44 PM

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doodlebug
i already commented before but i had to comment again cuz it meant so much more the second time :)
10/29/2011 2:51:24 PM

carley14
Wow that is a beautiful poem! I love writing poems too! BUt that was just an amazing poem! Never stop writing!
11/2/2011 7:24:37 PM

Manchita1
I don't know who wrote this, but WOW, I LOVE the symbolism! I thought it was beauty she was obeying, but the mirror? Makes me look at the mirror in my own room differently!
11/4/2011 5:21:35 PM

Manchita1
I don't know who wrote this, but WOW, I LOVE the symbolism! I thought it was beauty she was obeying, but the mirror? Makes me look at the mirror in my own room differently!
11/4/2011 5:21:39 PM

Manchita1
I don't know who wrote this, but WOW, I LOVE the symbolism! I thought it was beauty she was obeying, but the mirror? Makes me look at the mirror in my own room differently!
11/4/2011 5:21:41 PM

Manchita1
Whoops. Sorry...

I didn't mean to post that so many times.
11/4/2011 5:22:20 PM

Shyypie
its amazing
11/11/2011 11:27:21 AM

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shadalyn
Very insightful. Fantastic description!
11/22/2011 10:05:49 PM

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shadalyn
Very insightful. Fantastic description!
11/22/2011 10:05:53 PM

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slickygirl123
This is so inspirational! I wish every girl struggling with these types of things could read this
11/29/2011 9:03:33 PM

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slickygirl123
This is so inspirational! I wish every girl struggling with these types of things could read this
11/29/2011 9:03:36 PM

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slickygirl123
This is so inspirational! I wish every girl struggling with these types of things could read this
11/29/2011 9:03:39 PM

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slickygirl123
This is so inspirational! I wish every girl struggling with these types of things could read this
11/29/2011 9:03:43 PM

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slickygirl123
This is so inspirational! I wish every girl struggling with these types of things could read this
11/29/2011 9:03:59 PM

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slickygirl123
This is so inspirational! I wish every girl struggling with these types of things could read this
11/29/2011 9:04:02 PM

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rachelladine
whoa! that is so chilling. and so true. what a great poem!! great job
12/8/2011 8:25:03 PM

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Owlfeathers
This reminds me of a song by Superchi(k) called Courage.
12/24/2011 3:15:06 PM

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HorseGirl155
It's soo true! It's like the reality that we all go through!
12/30/2011 7:54:35 PM

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purplepenguin
This is amazing! You are VERY talented! God bless! :) <3 :)
12/31/2011 9:31:29 PM

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smiles236
wow that is amazing and eye opening. Thank you sooo much. :D
1/2/2012 10:39:21 AM

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AshFireheart
that is soooo cool it is very inspiring
1/2/2012 5:17:27 PM

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jbe818
Wow, amazing! Had be pulled in!
1/4/2012 2:49:02 PM

3026697
That was a beatiful poem. Every girl needs to read this. God has really given you the gift of writing! Thanks for using it to glorify him!
1/7/2012 8:30:12 PM

Hisprinces
This poem is really unique and so well written. So inspirational. I love is so much. Keep on writing for Christ, it's worth while.
1/9/2012 5:03:51 PM

Kayluvhope
Gorgeous! I had to read it twice.
1/11/2012 6:27:26 AM

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harmony95
That is a beautiful poem, and so true; even in my life!
1/12/2012 2:12:33 PM

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rizzette
Whoa! That is awesome and very true! I love it!!!!:)
1/15/2012 9:19:56 PM

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rizzette
Whoa! That is amazing and so very true!!!!!! I love it! :)
1/15/2012 9:25:51 PM

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SDS.chic
wow, I love this! You have such an amazing talent!
2/9/2012 9:56:55 PM

LivinOutLoud4The1
You know a lot of people think they need to do a buncha things to please other people. But you know, we weren't put on earth to please people, we were put here to please God. So lets not try to please the mirror.
2/15/2012 1:00:02 PM

LivinOutLoud4The1
You know, a lot of people think they need to do a buncha things to please other people. But you know, we weren't put on earth to please people, we were put here to please God. So lets not try to please the mirror.
2/15/2012 1:00:05 PM

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Ella
So cool. I couldn't believe I read it right when it said the mirror, then I read it again. Wow, so true, this poem captured just what I have always wanted to say about my reflection but could not. Thanks for the insperation!
2/16/2012 12:34:31 PM

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jbe818
LOVE <3
2/17/2012 6:14:38 PM

julhope1
That's really good!
3/8/2012 1:30:27 PM

julhope1
That's really good!
3/8/2012 1:30:31 PM

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bobo66
WOW!! That is such a great poem! <3<3<3
4/13/2012 4:04:28 PM

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bobo66
WOW!! That is such a great poem! <3<3<3
4/13/2012 4:04:50 PM

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bobo66
WOW!! That is such a great poem! <3<3<3
4/13/2012 4:04:55 PM

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bobo66
WOW!! That is such a great poem! <3<3<3
4/13/2012 4:05:00 PM

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bobo66
WOW!! That is such a great poem! <3<3<3
4/13/2012 4:05:06 PM

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